So as a reminder, here's the old Sentence:
And here is my new card:
Not perfect, but switching the POV definitely helped. At least there's a conflict now.
Not perfect, but switching the POV definitely helped. At least there's a conflict now.
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1 comments:
Hi, Emily.
I'm not up to the card lesson yet, but thanks for giving that example from your WIP. It looks like a technique that will be really useful to me. I tend to be a bit too woolly with what I need to achieve!
Hope
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